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« on: June 07, 2010, 03:55:21 PM »

Hey, I'm new to using Build so I decided to make this multiplayer map for fun.

Here's a screenshot of the map
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« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2010, 04:29:01 PM »

Hmm, I hope it comes out good!
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« Reply #2 on: June 07, 2010, 05:04:52 PM »

Hmm, I hope it comes out good!
Its already comming out good. Its ready for some multiplayer action.

Here's another screenshot inside the hotel
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« Reply #3 on: June 07, 2010, 05:31:09 PM »

Add some shading and it will look even cooler!

Lol, is that teleporter going to be out of order forever?
Or is it just to let you know it doesn't work? Lol.
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« Reply #4 on: June 07, 2010, 05:46:47 PM »

Add some shading and it will look even cooler!

Lol, is that teleporter going to be out of order forever?
Or is it just to let you know it doesn't work? Lol.
When I try to build that one, the teleporting system would glitch up so I decided to just make it unusable.
Here's another screenshot of a room with 2 babes
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« Reply #5 on: June 08, 2010, 02:47:16 AM »

Welcome aboard, Dakkiller! We´ve been waiting for new users and mappers, so you are welcome addition to these forums.

Nice shots. The latest shot is arguably the best one, just remember lighting and add details and trimwork to make map look more interesting. Avoid cramped areas and oversizing, misalignements, too bright or too dark areas and try create interesting layout that is ideal for Dukematch.

Good luck!
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« Reply #6 on: June 08, 2010, 04:07:03 AM »

Hmm, I hope it comes out good!
Its already comming out good. Its ready for some multiplayer action.



Screens look kinda dump.
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« Reply #7 on: June 08, 2010, 07:18:39 AM »

Here's the pool from underwater
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« Reply #8 on: June 08, 2010, 11:34:03 AM »

That's a square sector with nothing in it. Add more details.
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« Reply #9 on: June 08, 2010, 01:14:39 PM »

That's a square sector with nothing in it. Add more details.
You must be mistaken, it has heaps of details. Can you not see that med kit in the corner. Grin
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« Reply #10 on: June 08, 2010, 06:28:14 PM »

Totally missed that...

The point is that anyone here can come up with a room like that in five seconds. We're more than happy to have new people here who're interested in making maps but you should first take a look at some good maps and find out why they're so good.
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« Reply #11 on: June 08, 2010, 08:43:06 PM »

True, the water sector should also be darker but of course this is your map.

Also, make sure those babes are in the way of fire! that way the game with have more blood 'n' guts than there should be!
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« Reply #12 on: June 08, 2010, 09:02:34 PM »

True, the water sector should also be darker but of course this is your map.

Also, make sure those babes are in the way of fire! that way the game with have more blood 'n' guts than there should be!

Here's a room with traped babes in whats use to be a strip club till those egg pod aliens came in.
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« Reply #13 on: June 09, 2010, 12:14:36 PM »

I would choose a different texture for those walls - it's not meant to be used like that and the way the texture repeats itself doesn't look good. And I agree with Mikko.
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« Reply #14 on: June 09, 2010, 04:30:09 PM »

Attention!
Im making this map available to the public.
You should see a link there.

Here you go!

Be sure to visit my YouTube Channel at

http://www.youtube.com/user/Dakkiller1
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